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Tuesday, September 6, 2016

Ski trip 2016

Skiing fun
Today Rimu class is learning how to use screencastify. To test the screencastify we are using our ski trip recount. Hopefully this screencastify turns out good.
I really like how I did my writing because I was really nervous if I messed it up. Next time with my writing I might have to use my vocabulary and make my paragraphs even. Also I have to try and be more creative.

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  1. Lee-Anne WahoSeptember 6, 2016 at 10:40 AM

    Kia ora Milan
    Thanks for sharing your writing and reading it to us. What things did you like about your writing like did you use punctuation well, did you use a wide range of vocabulary and did you use language features? What is your next learning step in writing?

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  2. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2016 at 11:53 AM

    Hi Milan.
    Hi Milan its Sita.
    I really like that story of yours it sound really cool.
    In your writing, when you write bus, you put two s's instead of one.
    I think for your next step, you could talk a littlebit louder but outher then that, it is really good!
    Keep up the great work!
    Bye!

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    1. AnonymousSeptember 6, 2016 at 12:08 PM

      Thank for the advise Sita. Next time I will talk a bit louder and bye.

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