Bio Poem
Milan
I am funny, pretty, energetic and friendly
I am the big sister of Nikau, daughter of Teana and Anton,
great-granddaughter of Sandy and McGee.
great-granddaughter of Sandy and McGee.
I love my whanau, all 25 first cousin and my friends.
The three common feelings I feel is sadness, happiness
and Frustration.
and Frustration.
The things I fear is losing my family and friends, ghosts
and sharks.
and sharks.
My achievements are getting better at netball, making my
family proud and learning how to do my hair.
family proud and learning how to do my hair.
I want to go to Disney land and experience whats it’s like
to be in the army.
to be in the army.
I live in Christchurch, Hornby.
Milan Ngawaiata Ataahua Popata
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What is a slam poetry:
Thank you Milan
ReplyDeletei didnt know of this form of Poetry, i find the way you put your information together easy to follow and enjoyable to read.
Please take a little more time going over your work before Publishing, if some sentences do not sound right, try different words that have the same meaning instead.
I sometimes use the Thesaurus to find different variations of meaning for the same word, it is really helpful when Broadening your vocabulary.
Keep up the good work Milan.
Kia ora Milan, I like the details you have put into you biopoem. I enjoy the energy that sparkles from your performance work and your writing.
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