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Friday, March 31, 2017

A complaint from the letter

A Complaint Letter






Dear Milan
This is your old friend Desk , now you need to start using me or I will break I’ve had enough with you putting you clean clothes on me.


Plus it is really painful how you never ever use me for your work, why can’t you be excited to just use me  you adopted me  and  you need to  keep your promise that you will use me, I know that you are busy and you always try to keep me clean but it is a waste of time.Plus you always leave stuff on me.


Alright there is one more thing that you need to know is that sometimes  the things that are on me are so painful and that they are really hurting me with the sharp stuff on them. So I hope that everything sounds clear to you and that you will do the things I asked.


Sincerely your old friends: Shopkins
To Milan

3 comments:

  1. Hi Milan this is Nirvana here
    I think this is amazing and maybe you can stop saying hard thing because we know it will hurt so that might be a little good but it is amazing

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  2. Hi Milan Tyler here.
    I like the way you have write so much.
    Next time could you add more to your paragraphs.

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  3. hi milan courtney here
    i just wanted to say that you need to fix up some words like your title it should say. dear milan i hope you know your stuff that you putt on me really badly hurts? i want more words in it

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