Port Hills FIRE!!
In literacy Rimu has been doing a recount of the Port Hills fire, Miss Morgan has been looking at Rimu work for writing and looking at what they have done.
So the meaning of doing this recount is entertainment and put down how they felt about the fire and how other people felt.
Okay before you look at what I have done I am going to ask you some questions about the recount!
1. Did it entertain you?
2. Did it give you how I felt in the recount?
3. And did it give you the purpose of this writing?
Here are some photos of the Port Hills now and then
I saw the first fire was when I was at home it got me afraid about everyone. The blazing fire was soo scary it was the most terrifying thing in the world, I was at my nans and watching the news we heard the news that Port Hills was on fire, I went outside and saw the blazing fire it was so dark and black I couldn’t see the Port Hills.
The fire was really scary ,when it was morning I was still asleep. I finally woke up and my brother was right in my face yelling that he saw the fire. My grandparents called us in the afternoon and asked us if we saw the fire.
I felt soo bad for the people that lived up on Port Hill, I wonder how they felt when they got evacuated. I hoped that there wasn’t any kids that lived in one of the Port Hills houses. I bet the ones that live on Port Hills was afraid if their house got burnt down and that the blazing fire comes closer.
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